Friday, September 16, 2011

One Day Me and Friend were walking home from my friend’s house.  My street is named East Oakland and the street that we were in was Elm Wood. There was one house that I was to scare to look at and the people at my school call it Elm Wood’s Haunted House. My friend did not believe it was haunted. So that same night when we went past it my friend ran into the back yard. I was so scared and I ran home. She called me an hour later and said HELP ME! So I ran to the house by myself because my mom said that It went get in so much trouble if I went every on that street.
            I was so scared to see what the back yard looked like and I was so scared to see if my friend was dead. I wanted to turn around and go home but I did not want to leave my friend. She was one of my best friends and I did not want her to dead because I was to chicken to save her. So when I went in the backyard I heard screaming coming from the house. It did not sound like my friend but I went for the thing or the person any way. When I got to the door it was locked then I say a key sitting on a chair right next to the door. When I try the key the door open with out we turning the door knob. I was so scared to see what was next.
            The door creaked open and I walked in and it was all dirty with spiders and spider webs were everywhere. It had a dead animal smell and it look like blood but it smell like nail polish. I heard something scream so I ran by the door just in case. Then the whole house was quite. I walked all around the house and no word from my friend. I tried to call her phone but it was off. But then I heard my friend giggle and I heard one more voice but I could not say what it was because it did not sound like a person. The giggling would not stop, but as soon and I touch the first step to go up stairs it stops. I ran up the stairs to see if my friend was messing with me and there were 6 bedrooms with the sheets and pillows all over the ground everywhere. It was a big mess and I heard screaming and out of the blue……….. “HELP ME.” I ran up to the 3rd floor and I saw a guy there with a sharp knife. Nothing was on the knife. I saw my friend tide up to the bed. I screamed and went to go save my friend from the guy but I trip running to save her. My friend yelled “Hannah help me.” I got back up and ran to her. The guy came at me and I pushed him over and he fell. I got my friend untied and we ran out of the house still alive. When we were running we had not seen the guy, but when we got home my mom said someone was here for you and it was the guy.
 
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One Day Me and Friend were walking home from my friend’s house.  My street is named East Oakland and the street that we were in was Elm Wood. There was one house that I was to scare to look at and the people at my school call it Elm Wood’s Haunted House. My friend did not believe it was haunted. So that same night when we went past it my friend ran into the back yard. I was so scared and I ran home. She called me an hour later and said HELP ME! So I ran to the house by myself because my mom said that It went get in so much trouble if I went every on that street.
            I was so scared to see what the back yard looked like and I was so scared to see if my friend was dead. I wanted to turn around and go home but I did not want to leave my friend. She was one of my best friends and I did not want her to dead because I was to chicken to save her. So when I went in the backyard I heard screaming coming from the house. It did not sound like my friend but I went for the thing or the person any way. When I got to the door it was locked then I say a key sitting on a chair right next to the door. When I try the key the door open with out we turning the door knob. I was so scared to see what was next.
            The door creaked open and I walked in and it was all dirty with spiders and spider webs were everywhere. It had a dead animal smell and it look like blood but it smell like nail polish. I heard something scream so I ran by the door just in case. Then the whole house was quite. I walked all around the house and no word from my friend. I tried to call her phone but it was off. But then I heard my friend giggle and I heard one more voice but I could not say what it was because it did not sound like a person. The giggling would not stop, but as soon and I touch the first step to go up stairs it stops. I ran up the stairs to see if my friend was messing with me and there were 6 bedrooms with the sheets and pillows all over the ground everywhere. It was a big mess and I heard screaming and out of the blue……….. “HELP ME.” I ran up to the 3rd floor and I saw a guy there with a sharp knife. Nothing was on the knife. I saw my friend tide up to the bed. I screamed and went to go save my friend from the guy but I trip running to save her. My friend yelled “Hannah help me.” I got back up and ran to her. The guy came at me and I pushed him over and he fell. I got my friend untied and we ran out of the house still alive. When we were running we had not seen the guy, but when we got home my mom said someone was here for you and it was the guy.
 
         The end 
 
           

One Day m friend and i were walking home from my friend’s house.  My street is named East Oakland and the street that we were in was Elm Wood. There was one house that I was to scared to look at and the people at my school called it Elm Wood’s Haunted House. My friend did not believe it was haunted. So that same night when we went pastthe house my friend ran into the back yard. I was so scared and I ran home. She called me an hour later and said HELP ME! So I ran to the house by myself because my mom said that It went to the house on Elm Wood i would get in so much trouble because there was someone who die there.
            I was so scared to see what the back yard looked like and I was so scared to see if my friend was dead. I wanted to turn around and go home but I did not want to leave my friend. She was one of my best friends and I did not want her to die because I was to chicken to save her. So when I went in the backyard I heard screaming coming from the house. It did not sound like my friend but I went for the thing or the person any way. When I got to the door it was locked then I say a key sitting on a chair right next to the door. When I try the key the door open with out we turning the door knob. I was so scared to see what was next.
            The door creaked open and I walked in and it was all dirty with spiders and spider webs were everywhere. It had a dead animal smell and it look like blood but it smell like nail polish. I heard something scream so I ran by the door just in case. Then the whole house was quite. I walked all around the house and no word from my friend. I tried to call her phone but it was off. But then I heard my friend giggle and I heard one more voice but I could not say what it was because it did not sound like a person. The giggling would not stop, but as soon and I touch the first step to go up stairs it stops. I ran up the stairs to see if my friend was messing with me and there were 6 bedrooms with the sheets and pillows all over the ground everywhere. It was a big mess and I heard screaming and out of the blue……….. “HELP ME.” I ran up to the 3rd floor and I saw a guy there with a sharp knife. Nothing was on the knife. I saw my friend tide up to the bed. I screamed and went to go save my friend from the guy but I trip running to save her. My friend yelled “Hannah help me.” I got back up and ran to her. The guy came at me and I pushed him over and he fell. I got my friend untied and we ran out of the house still alive. When we were running we had not seen the guy, but when we got home my mom said someone was here for you and it was the guy.
 
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